Myth on Western Expansion

I shower to my professor today it is more better than the last one. but the problem is in the 2 nd paragraph you talk to much about violence.. it needs to be more about how people saw this back then. such as a romantic, bright , cowboys were heroes , and so on…. also I need a paragraph or 2 containing the historical background

The 2nd paragraph the way you start it is good. but as it gets more into it. you start talking about violence…. talk about how back then people viewed this as a romantic time. where we came and we conquered. cowboys were seen as heroes. married lived happily and what not

And please remember to use high school wording. not big words that makes the paper sound to professional . remember I said my vocab isn’t that great . And i don’t use big words. just keep it simple. cause In this paper you used a lot of words or things I wouldn’t say

Also use quotes from website and cute to give you evidence

By when can you do that? And pls make sure you send me the website links you used/ are using. I also need them. thanks

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President Thomas Jefferson purchased the Louisiana territory in 1803 from the French government for $15million. The purchased land stretched from Mississippi river to the Rocky Mountains thus doubling the initial size of the United States of America. According to Jefferson, westward expansion was a significant aspect to the health of the nation based on the fact that he believed that the republic had initially………….

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