Review the ideas and share thoughts on literature and methodology

Review the ideas and share thoughts on literature and methodology to improve the quality and depth of work.

Requirements:

1-Write as second language.

2-Use simple academic words.

3-Use APA format.

4-Write your own thoughts to enhance the work.

5-In attached you will find four different drafts choose the best two and make response to it within 500 words.

first_draft_edited.edited my_first_draft_1 first_draft li_alsiwar_capstone_most_recent_draft_2