How consistent was the paper’s structure and organization with the thesis

Work on making the thesis more specific and detailed. It is currently very vague.

Use the outline to make a 12 page paper on the topic(automation). Make sure to expand on the ideas on the paper and feel free to put you intel too.

The paper should follow the outline fairly closely, although changes from the outline are expected and have no negative impact on the paper. Here is the recommended outline and suggested length of each section. These are guidelines to be sure you include everything:
•Title Page, including your name and title of paper •Abstract & Thesis (1/2 page)
•Assess Current Situation (1)
•Current Limitations/Needs (1)
•Opportunities for New Technology (2) •Supporters/Why (1)
•Role of Government (1)
•Impact on Society (2)
•What Success Looks Like (1) •Conclusion (1/2-1) •Bibliography list of references
Rubric Items for Final Paper
GNED 220 FINAL PAPER 5
•Was the thesis written in a clear, focused and informative sentence that leaves no doubt about the writer’s point of view?sufficient (15 points)
•How clearly does the paper show the writer’s depth of understanding of the situation and the opportunity to address it with the chosen emerging technology? (30 points)
• How consistent was the paper’s structure and organization with the thesis? (30 points)
• How precisely did the paper identify the current situation and current limitations and needs? (20) •How reasonable was the proposed application of technology for addressing the needs cited? (20 points) •How effectively did the paper identify:
• potential advocates/supporters (10 points)
• roleofgovernmentinaddressingtheneedandthepotentialimpactonsociety?(10points) • what successful implementation would look like?(20)
• Was level of research sufficient and the quality of sources sufficient for the topic? (20 points)
• How well did conclusion consolidate the major points without introducing new information? (10 points)
• Was the paper well constructed, easy to read, void of spelling and grammatical mistakes and consistent with the guidelines of the assignment? (15 points)