Retirement Party
NO PLAGIARISM
ORIGINAL THOUGHTS ONLY
REFERENCE PAGE NEEDED
FOLLOWING INSTRUCTIONS PLEASE
TO: Bobby Johnson
SUBJECT: Retirement Party
Hello everyone. As you know Joe Banyon is retiring next month. I’ve been asked by some of his friends to arrange a little farewell party in his honour.
The date is Friday, 6 p.m. at City Café, and we hope you can make it.
We would like to give him a gift certificate. We are asking everyone to contribute. Let me know ASAP.
See you there.
Bobby
Write a three to four (3-) page paper that answers the following:
Identify the communication problems with the email.
Using the 10 Cs for Writing Effectively, rewrite the email.
Include: content, completeness, correctness, clarity, coherence, conciseness, connection, creativity, courtesy, and closure.
Identify which Cs you used where and how that changed the email in terms of the effectiveness.
Identify the strategies used for composing a more effective message.
The format of the paper is to be as follows:
Typed, double-spaced, Times New Roman font (size 12), one-inch margins on all sides, APA format in a Microsoft Word document.
Use headers for each of the subjects being covered, followed by your response.
In addition to the three to four 3-pages required, a title page is to be included. The title page is to contain the title of the assignment, your name, the instructor’s name, the course title, and the date.
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Emailing is a way of communication where messages are sent electronically. It can be used for personal and business purposes. If an email is not written correctly, the message can be misinterpreted, and that can lead to problems. The email to Bobby is a corporate organizing a send-off party for one of their own who is set to retire. The message is short clear and to the point. However, it is not written using the 10 C’s of effective writing and has many errors. The email ought to be official………………………
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