heroism and unity
I need help w these questions
What do you think is the main idea of the essay?
What is the thesis statement in this essay? Is the thesis easily identifiable? Where was the
thesis located? Can you help the author fix the problem, if one exists?
List all major topics in this essay that relate back to the thesis statement.
List topics that do not relate to the main thesis statement.
Describe the passages that you do not understand. Include reasoning as to why you do not
understand the sections.
Highlight any spelling, grammatical or sentence structure errors. You may point out a few
examples. You do not need to “correct” any errors. Give “examples” of the types of errors
present in the essay.
Provide general feedback. What was your overall reaction to the essay? Was the essay easy to
follow? List several strong points and several of the weak points in the essay.
Was the introduction interesting? Did the conclusion bring a close to the essay?
Focused Descriptive Essay Rough Draft
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The main idea in the essay is heroism and unity. The author brings out much heroism characteristic that the author’s grandfather possessed. She talks about his grandfather from his youthful life until his old age and all what he did in the course of his life. The author mentions certain characteristics such as his grandfather spoke with authority, treated people without biases, and respected all. He was a man of career, because the author mentions his works in various specialties………………….
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