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Please edit the story I have written so far and change the wordings to make it creative and exciting for the reader. Also, add more to it please to make it enjoyable

MLA 1pg singlespaced

“It’s in the box”

 

During my summer vacation, my family and I travelled to Munich, Germany. I consider Munich as my second home since it has been our favorite destination for the past 20 years. We have a house there and all our family come together under one roof for the entire summer vacation. On a sunny day, my sister and I decided to go shopping. We had a week left before we head back to Abu Dhabi so we bought gifts for our friends and family. After hours of shopping we finally head back home with many shopping bags.On our way back, I realized that my phone is not in my hands but I did not care much to search for it since I assumed that it might be in my bag. When I reached home and searched my bag, I realized that my phone was not there. On top of that, I remembered that it was on silent and that is whenmy panic attack began. It was a Saturday, and all I could think of is how will I cope the upcoming two days without a smartphone. I searched my room, my sister’s room and the living room but I couldn’t find it. I then searched the car many times, between and under the seats but I didn’t find it. My sister was busy packing the gifts we bought that day so I had to search all the shopping bags on my own. Only 20 minutes passed since I realized that I lost my phone but it felt like hours. In the middle of my search, my brother asked me if I had my phone registered with find my iPhone application and that is when I realized that I should have thought of that way before. I rushed to my laptop and opened the application. It took a few minutes to search and while I was waiting I hear my sister calling my name and saying “it’s in the box”. Thankfully my sister found it in between some clothes from one of the shopping bags that she already placed in a cargo box.  I was so relieved to have finally found it and that is when I realized that I am addicted to having a smartphonewhich worried me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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“It’s in the box”

 

The summer is considered by many as one of the best times of the year. This being the case, there are many activities that one can undertake during the holiday. Among the many events that people do include in their calendars is spending time with the family. My family is no different from that group of individuals. During my summer vacation, my family and I travelled to Munich, Germany. For the past 20 years, Munich has been the family’s favorite summer destination. This could be due to the fact that there is a family home in the city and so, it has become a norm for the family to get together in the mansion during holidays. It provides a chance for the family to bond and get to know each other better away from the daily hustles back at home.

One of the favorite activities that we do while on vacation………………

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